Comic 141 - Page 140

7th Aug 2020, 1:00 AM
Page 140
Average Rating: 5 (3 votes)
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Author Notes:

melaredblu 7th Aug 2020, 1:00 AM edit delete
melaredblu
more than she can chew

Comments:

NeilKapit 7th Aug 2020, 7:11 PM edit delete reply
NeilKapit
I didn’t even pick up that visual metaphor, nice work
melaredblu 8th Aug 2020, 6:00 PM edit delete reply
melaredblu
Thanks! I felt like it was fitting.
Proxy170 9th Aug 2020, 5:59 PM edit delete reply
Proxy170
The dialogue on this page feels really natural. I also admire when a comic creator takes time to do these sort of scenes, because sometimes the "slow" scenes really add to a story even though they can easily be left out (but then you get a more hollow story)
melaredblu 9th Aug 2020, 9:04 PM edit delete reply
melaredblu
The dialog in this scene went though SO MANY revisions. Exposition is difficult to do in this story since everyone is related and they already know quite a bit about each other. I'm very happy to hear that you think it sounds natural!