Comic 141 - Page 140

7th Aug 2020, 1:00 AM
Page 140
Average Rating: 5 (3 votes)
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melaredblu 7th Aug 2020, 1:00 AM edit delete
more than she can chew


NeilKapit 7th Aug 2020, 7:11 PM edit delete reply
I didn’t even pick up that visual metaphor, nice work
melaredblu 8th Aug 2020, 6:00 PM edit delete reply
Thanks! I felt like it was fitting.
Proxy170 9th Aug 2020, 5:59 PM edit delete reply
The dialogue on this page feels really natural. I also admire when a comic creator takes time to do these sort of scenes, because sometimes the "slow" scenes really add to a story even though they can easily be left out (but then you get a more hollow story)
melaredblu 9th Aug 2020, 9:04 PM edit delete reply
The dialog in this scene went though SO MANY revisions. Exposition is difficult to do in this story since everyone is related and they already know quite a bit about each other. I'm very happy to hear that you think it sounds natural!