Comic 4 - Page 3

27th Oct 2017, 1:17 AM
Page 3
Average Rating: 5 (3 votes)
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Author Notes:

melaredblu 27th Oct 2017, 1:17 AM edit delete
melaredblu
Sometimes you just want somebody to listen.

Comments:

Proxy170 27th Oct 2017, 9:10 AM edit delete reply
Proxy170
Yep, totally hear ya! I'll admit that I'm not always a good listener. If you tell me a problem, I assume you want my help fixing it, not just venting!
melaredblu 28th Oct 2017, 12:52 AM edit delete reply
melaredblu
Frankly, I'm not the world's greatest listener either. I have to try hard to shut up and just let the other person talk.
NeilKapit 29th Oct 2017, 1:38 PM edit delete reply
NeilKapit
Art here is exceptional. The greyscale tones are impressively layered, but the seemingly sparse linework has some subtle but poignant details as well (like the few loose strands of hair over the girl's left eye in the last panel)
melaredblu 29th Oct 2017, 7:01 PM edit delete reply
melaredblu
Zoey's emo hair is kind of fun to draw. I do have to wonder how the poor girl can see half the time, though.
Mrremoraman 6th Mar 2020, 2:59 AM edit delete reply
Mrremoraman
I like the connection here, there sense of caring that's not too schmultzy. Very nice bit of dialogue!
melaredblu 7th Mar 2020, 1:11 PM edit delete reply
melaredblu
I appreciate that. I try to make the characters talk like real people here, which is surprisingly hard.